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You are a student at Greenfield University. You recently joined the university gym because you want to exercise regularly between afternoon classes.

During the past two weeks, several exercise machines have repeatedly been out of order, the locker room has often been unclean, and the gym has become extremely crowded in the evening. You have sometimes waited more than twenty minutes for equipment and have been unable to complete your planned workouts.

Write an email toMr. Patelthe campus recreation director
Your response should:
  • Explain how long the problems have been happening and give specific examples.
  • Describe how the conditions affect your exercise and health routine.
  • Suggest one or two practical solutions for the recreation center.
  • Use a polite and organized email format and write about 120–150 words.

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